Umm I'm really not sure about the punctuation so feedback would be really appreciated. Thanks!
Inspiration
The search, the famed search, for inspiration;
Tackled by every artist, every writer.
A glorious quest, for the illuminating spark,
That reveals the path to the lost, ever brighter.
One by one, bold, daring knights,
We ride out, far into unknown lands;
Driven by the desire, to find something worthwhile,
Something life changing, monumental, grand.
We are prepared, to battle the forces of writers' block,
To drive away the evil minions of despair,
So that we may find what we came for,
That stroke of genius, the answer to all our prayers.
This journey we embark on is long and difficult,
Our goal near impossible to achieve.
Yet still we ride, serious, determined,
Armed to the teeth with our unshakable beliefs.
But often, the search is more relaxed, playful,
Like children playing hide and seek in a field;
We run about, shouting, laughing, striving
To catch a glimpse of the wonder that is hidden, veiled.
We are thorough, leaving no rock unturned;
Checking beneath every petal of every flower;
Listening intently to every whisper of the wind;
Yet what we seek slips through our grasps like fine powder.
Look! There it is- behind the daffodils;
Wait, never mind- it's gone again.
A teasing plot bunny hopping about,
Now here, now there, causing us emotional pain.
The never ending search for inspiration;
We may succeed once, but soon will be forced to search once more.
And yet, we never tire, never give up,
For those rare moments of genius are worth trying for.